I would like to start by saying that this is a huge improvement over the first time you drew Tap and Rita, and even a huge improvement over the big group shot you did more recently. The lighting effects here are very well executed, and you've really gotten the hang of proportion and form.
I'm impressed with the artistic growth you've displayed in a relatively short span of time. Keep up the fantastic work~
And now that I have the artsy part out of the way, let me say:
You have captured them flawlessly. I think this is probably one of my favorite pieces of these two because it really, really matches the tone of their characters just right. An outstanding rendition~
Thank you so very much. I'll try and get chapter 7 done as soon as I can.